No one here is qualified to "critique" your poem .

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Posted by I on October 05, 19101 at 12:50:36:

In Reply to: Please post comments!!! posted by ana on October 04, 19101 at 08:34:44:

Maybe your poem spoke to someone , maybe it brought
an opportunity for someone to express him/herself through
your own efforts . Maybe no one related to your words .
How did writing the poem made you feel ? This is the
best critique. The rest : reference to rythm , rhyme ,
shape , subject , etc. is bs .

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