this..so true...so much Rai..inside????????????

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Posted by hm on February 06, 19102 at 00:20:46:

In Reply to: Mal Galbi posted by Paul on January 23, 19102 at 21:00:17:

Sorry but your poem is very weak and not even romantic. It doesn't feel it
coming from the heart but more from a bad movie. I'm not trying to put you
down. It's just my opinion. Write what you feel with out over exaggerations.
It's too cheesy.

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Comments: :Sorry but your poem is very weak and not even romantic. It doesn't feel it :coming from the heart but more from a bad movie. I'm not trying to put you :down. It's just my opinion. Write what you feel with out over exaggerations. :It's too cheesy.